my body was sunnned
on a day bright and sky azure
and my skin colour hued
as the rays striked the divine floor
and then suffused in the air so pure
felt as i heard sacred bells' ting
never had seen so bright a thing
seemed had landed some signs heavenly
or any crucified sin conspicuously
at that picture so exotic
like life in shadows so enigmatic
my mind flooded with mysticism
only then vaguely i heard my criticism
stunnned i turned behind and stood
to see but alas! nothing i could
forehead perspired fists clenched
irascible my body trembled
thrilled with agony
i ran like a hound
to find reason but only
with nothing found
tired i fell on ground
lost my sense in belligerence
but the light so bright and intense
i could even feel behind my eyelids
like husk is removed off seeds
my soul got cleansed
off my wrong deeds.
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seriously wat an imagination..hats off ya..no words to speak out..
ReplyDeletereally nice thoughts,strong deepness is involved.no word to say.keep it up.
ReplyDeletethanx deepshikha and gita .... :D :)
ReplyDeletenice composition, hope your soul finally got cleansed :P
ReplyDeleteKudos to you on your first fantabulous and splendid post
really u proved in d 1st post dat u have a high standard of imagination....solid hai boss.
ReplyDeletemast hai.. keep it up!! :)
ReplyDeleteawesome....impressive i must say....keep it up patna
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ReplyDeletethanx all :)
ReplyDeletereally, very nice.... good work and a very wide imagination supriya..... keep writing/composing...
ReplyDeletewish u!!!!
nice way to start n brilliant imagination..... keep going ... :)
ReplyDeleteNice composition of brilliant, intense imagination in words #touched
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